Thanks, Kevin (and Jon).
My initial thoughts:
1. "the CIA's Near East Division figured out bin Laden was behind the attacks"
"was behind" = concluded or declared? ... the way it is now seems a bit leading for the reader ... do we really know where OBL fits into the events of 9/11?
2. I totally agree with what you said at the end, but I wonder if there is perhaps a more appropriate NPV-like way of saying it...( :LOL: ).
But seriously, I can appreciate the emotional frustration one must encounter when compiling all this information.
..."if you're wondering"... ( :rofl: ) ... it really is a beautiful piece of sarcasm.